tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-454064954787400848.post4282499063630371985..comments2024-03-24T02:19:27.138-05:00Comments on Mirror Dance: LegendUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-454064954787400848.post-4280960804868971232011-05-03T22:41:25.651-05:002011-05-03T22:41:25.651-05:00Uncle Jon,
I can not believe it!! Great..no beyo...Uncle Jon,<br /> I can not believe it!! Great..no beyond great!!! WOW!!<br />EVERYONE MY UNCLE IS A GENIUS!! <br />Love ya..SarahSarahnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-454064954787400848.post-41804919211793433432010-07-29T23:18:20.712-05:002010-07-29T23:18:20.712-05:00Nice work, Jon!Nice work, Jon!Rickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14546882686381428986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-454064954787400848.post-84548913267707886932010-06-06T13:25:30.669-05:002010-06-06T13:25:30.669-05:00Nicely done. You made the characters breathe their...Nicely done. You made the characters breathe their lack of life. Kept thinking, he can't be done yet. Write more.Linda Glazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04374683352435771715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-454064954787400848.post-276496882926560802010-06-05T19:54:47.325-05:002010-06-05T19:54:47.325-05:00Oh, I liked that, Jon! Great premise, and writing...Oh, I liked that, Jon! Great premise, and writing. I really liked this description, too: "...hoarding to herself her own fading warmth."RK Sterlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01034917381901499281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-454064954787400848.post-17885484625366358082010-06-05T18:49:33.188-05:002010-06-05T18:49:33.188-05:00Brrr. Made me feel cold myself. And I'm huma...Brrr. Made me feel cold myself. And I'm human, not vampire.<br /><br />It's good to see you in print, Jon.<br /><br />JeanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-454064954787400848.post-69903826599453470402010-06-04T17:51:38.717-05:002010-06-04T17:51:38.717-05:00Very nice. It makes me crave more as well. Great d...Very nice. It makes me crave more as well. Great description. Great dislogue. Not too much...just enough. I liked it very much. It inspires me greatly.<br />--James<br />http://jamesgarciajr.blogspot.com/James Garcia Jrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00559119178720751963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-454064954787400848.post-70379837175773156292010-06-02T21:39:55.594-05:002010-06-02T21:39:55.594-05:00Jon,
What a vivid imagination.
I felt like I was r...Jon,<br />What a vivid imagination.<br />I felt like I was right there flying above the characters, feeling their emotions and importance of their concerns. Great descriptive wording, takes you right there for the moment. The story has an intensity that keeps the reader wanting more. Keep up the great work, hope to read more from you.<br />Joycecucchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05008600719662372629noreply@blogger.com